Comments on: Cerpen : Mimpi Eman

By: billynain

billynain — Thu, 18 Mar 2010 02:54:40 +0000

teruskan usaha
plot tak berapa kemas,
bahasa dh okey tp kena perbaiki lg
overall okey…but mana penamat cerita?

By: Que_Lyana

Que_Lyana — Thu, 11 Mar 2010 08:47:44 +0000

Salam.
1) penyusunan ayat bagi betul ye
2) kemaskini penggunaan tanda baca
3) perjalanan cerita biasa saje, tapi oklah
3) Tahniah! teruskan berkarya

By: erica71

erica71 — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 16:43:45 +0000

aik…dah habis?xsempat nak feeling la Achik ular yg mana satu yek?

By: fatiah

fatiah — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 15:20:32 +0000

aik, nape mcm xtmt aje cite nie?…

tpi overall ok ar, best

By: nuriz

nuriz — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 15:19:13 +0000

yelah tergantung…
citerkanla smp habis,

By: yani

yani — Fri, 05 Mar 2010 05:57:22 +0000

la t’gantung plak,sambung cepat sikit nak tau juga ular yg mana pilihan Eman.

By: xyda

xyda — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 12:54:33 +0000

apesal t`gantung???
nk ader yg 2nd kew???
pepapn gud job!!!

By: eila

eila — Wed, 03 Mar 2010 16:21:40 +0000

stuju ngan aliyya..baik baca nvel.. bc cerpen ni cuz kita nk tau endingnya tym 2 gak.. nape lak buat tgantung, nak sruh pmbaca pikir lak.. bukan kta yg tulis cerpen 2.

By: nikku

nikku — Tue, 02 Mar 2010 04:48:30 +0000

ala sambung r blik…
dpat kemgkinan ni…
dr rezal pun nak gak…achik pun nak gakkk
writer r kena wak pilihan…

By: fiza

fiza — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 11:51:42 +0000

bes dh cerpen ni…tp tetiba je hbs cmtu je…hrp writer dpt hbskan cerpen ni ye…nk smbgn…

By: asiza

asiza — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 05:53:29 +0000

loooooo..xkn 2 je..ayoooo..adeh tgantung la..wat org tertanya je

By: aliyya

aliyya — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 19:20:40 +0000

his,!! da nek malaz rase nyer bace cerpen nie seme..
asd trgntog jew..
kalo cm 2 bek bce novel jer..
lg snang, trang2 tgntongnyer..

By: A.1

A.1 — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 17:36:54 +0000

nape trgantnggggggg?????????

By: panda

panda — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 11:38:04 +0000

writer suh kite pikir sndiri kots ;p

By: ichiki kirara

ichiki kirara — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 09:32:05 +0000

salam…
jalan crita dah okey…
tp knapa pnlis mcm tergesa2 nk tamatkn cerpen ni…
smp tergantung…
x thu pa yg jd pda eman & abg hanif…
ke cerpen ni da smbgn dia???

pape pn,truskn berkarya…

By: nabilah

nabilah — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 06:19:22 +0000

asl banyak sgt cerpen tergantung ek??

By: rubisya

rubisya — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 05:39:23 +0000

cerpen yg tergantung lg